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Of Happiness

Of Happiness

I have all along been sitting and glossing
under an apple tree
all my life
what happiness can be

a simple comparison of combined incidents
some happy
some sorry
and
from the milk of both
if you can but extract
the elixir of happiness
twill a successful story be
of what happiness tis

your poetry lends happiness to me
but let me be happy
and
so end here my story
one must simply be just happy!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

is hard. Good poem kid.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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with Love from kid
loved and lovedly one
like a son eh!

author comment

another good one.

Alid

I agree, good poem!

Love Mand xxx

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