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halve me

I am only half

In 1970's I died in an accident
went to heaven

My doggy belt was held by my wife
as a dogs
and she pulled me back alive
I was recalled by humans

Half side almost dead
left-hand side of head
was bloated red

How I wish I had flown to heaven

Now again in late 1990's
I faced a calamity
the brain was again fractured
half an eye
half an ear
nerves pulsating

I tell no one
not even to those to me so dear
as death I have been awaiting
at the threshold of time
ere I was born
half alive
half dead

still am swimming ahead many
who ought to never have been read
ought to have been since long dead

I still await!

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i would suggest you write 'LHS' out full - 'left-hand side'

love judy

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

left hand side twill be
left-hand side

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As Judy say's great! :)

LOve Mand xxx

very well composed. great impact. bravo !!!!!


my best poet friend Joe
how did this last week go?

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bad....a matter of time.

pass ..............
we all come this way
only once
stay as much as you can
compose poetrys and life combine
smooth and calm your mind
tis will divine
not yours nor mine

i too am half nerves
at any way standing on side kerbs
who can say who will shed
a first tear you or I?
lets into the wilderness fly
where in the oasis and mirages
poets lie
ere one to the world says bye
ere we sans all

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