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GOD'S WILL

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2022-01-17 16:59

AND THIS IS GOD'S WILL
Thank YOU I Must
FOR Passing Such Poetical Time
ALL Lords Blessings
A Wasteful Life
Passing BY IS Being Kept Alive

Keep THE Waterfalls Flowing
LET NOT THE Snow AT Niagara Solidify
Then What Will HE Think
Where AM I Alive

Gods Will IS Written
IN THE Winds OF Destiny
Some Read IT
Some Understand IT
BUT NOT

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Mon, 2022-01-17 17:38

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I will skip the discussion here and just let you know that I've read it! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

lovedly

Mon, 2022-01-17 17:48

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GEE
I KNOW WHY
COZ U KNOW ME

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Ray Whitaker

Fri, 2022-01-21 16:08

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Is there a method to the capitalizations found scattered thruout this piece?you likely know that e.e.cummings wrote in this way a lot.

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Ray Whitaker

Fri, 2022-01-21 16:08

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Is there a method to the capitalizations found scattered thruout this piece?you likely know that e.e.cummings wrote in this way a lot.

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lovedly

Fri, 2022-01-21 22:54

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I don't comment on every poem
I used to comment
then convert it into a poem
my one a day kind

jess kicked me
Ian held my hand

Ray some say I maybe Wordsmith
some say Shakespeare
IAN always till his last days addressed me as
THE BARD YOU KNOW WHO

now you say ee cummings
wow thanks
don't I have my original organs

BRAIN is the most important
My mind works as a compy does
till some guy said
LETS CONVERT him into a computer

Today after a long wait
some one has commented twice
Thank you Ray
I try to claim I too am a NEOPOET
14 to 15 years as loved now technically lovedly

Thanks POET AND AUTHOR Ray
hurray

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