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God's Mysterious Legend [January Contest]

When Gracious God had created thee,
He also created the precious sea,
He created the sky, the brightest moon,
and created the inestimable boon.

From free drops of love the legend was born,
with every secret that's peacefully thrown,
to keep the memories, those that are waif,
with cautious corals, they're always safe.

For decades now, the legend still alive
with all the mysteries that deep down dive.
A legend that blooms with a virgin lotus,
for it's God's most magnum opus.

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Structured: Western
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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joy at the natural order of a plan. Only one little crit. I would delete the [s] from the legend in the "For decades now, the legend's still alive" making it: [For decades now, the legend still alive] Not a big deal, but I think that it makes it a bit smoother.
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Geezer. I didn't like it either :) but I didn't want to sacrifice grammer for a smoother read.
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