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generation gap
leaves perish, baring branches, trees grieve a generation gone,
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Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How does this theme appeal to you?
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Comments
tyro
Sat, 2018-08-04 06:41
there is a very crystal
there is a very crystal quality in this.
only I do not like the last word, there is negativity associated with it, maybe gone is an idea, or some other neutral word.really like this one, it is finely structured.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
raj
Sat, 2018-08-04 13:39
thanks tyro
thanks for the read....i liked your suggestion and reason for it and accepting it unless I find an alternative...good to know you liked clarity of thought and the structure...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Sat, 2018-08-04 13:47
high raj
generation in human is 30
and in trees only one another circle
but a generation none the less
lovely single liner creation,an intelligent rendition
raj
Sat, 2018-08-04 13:48
thanks Lovedly for the read
thanks Lovedly for the read and comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Sat, 2018-08-04 13:50
raj instantly
ur poetry is read
deliciously