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Once upon a time
Letting all align
Getting through a line
Pulling hard the twine

Every thought on mind
Gazing through the hind
All along like blind
Only get behind

To be seen ahead
Blindly set forget
Getting rid to set
Never met at then

Peeping through the side
Looking all of kind
Slowly walk remind
At last set aside

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