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Gaia
Loneliness was a gift
That opened nature to me
I began to personify her
Kissing my arms
With rain
To untrouble my wounds
The wind giving me a spritely push
In the right direction
Running her fingers
Through my abandoned hair
The sunrise and sunset
Her personalized
Paintings
Meant to expand
And emblazon my
Forgotten soul
All this seen and felt
Of course
By everyone else
But by me in a particularly
Friendly,
Natural,
Even intimate way
I could see why
They call her
Such a beautiful name
As Gaia
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Shadowdancer3349
Thu, 2018-10-04 00:57
Greg
This is more in depth than your usual writes I like this form of your writing
Rula
Thu, 2018-10-04 02:00
Thanks for
Introducing me to Gaia greg!
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