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The field

In the grass
Here I lie.
Here until
The day I die.

I stray away
From the light.
Until darkness
I may fright.

It's okay
As time may pass.
The further I go
The further it lasts.

So here i lie in the grass
Here until the day I pass.

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Free verse
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Not very cheerful!

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