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Fashion U Turn
a stone washed jeans with holes
considered fashionable and bold
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is a tag line that is sold
men don't mind it at all
might even have a ball
if long skirts go short
none would ever snort
winter does bring a change
long's in fashion once again
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it's mittens n red noses
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IRiz
Wed, 2018-10-24 10:41
I love the mittens and red
I love the mittens and red noses
You make me look forward to winter!
Crisp air, early frost,
bright sun falls
right trough the naked branches
Children and their moms smile
Cheeks like fresh apples
IRiz
raj
Wed, 2018-10-24 13:45
Hi IRiz
good to know you liked the line "it's mittens and red noses"...so get ready for winter which as you have said is almost knocking on your door...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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