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Doctor

It’s a new virus which I have caught you know,
I feel silence all around me even though if somebody smiles,
I couldn’t even sleep and I feel sicker you know,
I don’t know why tears are coming out of my eyes,
Please find any medicine that I will help me forget her love,
Doctors please give me a medicine so I can’t remember her,
Doctors please give me a medicine so I can’t remember her…

My happiness turned into sadness,
I have got so much pain in my heart now I hate Sundays,
Now I drink alcohol a lot because of your madness,
You broke my heart and I pray to god never come Sunday,
I loved her a lot, she betrayed me,
Doctors please give me a medicine so I can’t remember her,
Doctors please give me a medicine so I can’t remember her…

Now my bed looks like coffin to me,
I’m like walking dead you know,
My heart is buried into the soil; you know what I mean,
Schrey lost from love you know,
He lost from love,
Doctors please give him a medicine so he can’t remember her,
Doctors please give him a medicine so he can’t remember her…

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Girl my heart broken and I will never love again -Schrey
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This will resonate with anyone who has been betrayed by a lover.

i had an ole friend he would always start any sentence with
you know
then one day i said
no i don't know
he got annoyed
was you know what may be you know was ye you know hopefully

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