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Diamente

                                               
                         Morning
                     chilly, dewy
        refreshing, astounding, aspiring
         virgin, placid, quiet, elegant
          freezing, amusing, inspiring
                   romantic, dark
                         Night

 

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The only thing I can say is:- "Lovely". I will play with the words and send them to you..
Yours as always Ian xx

Morning

The edge of the night makes the air chilly,
Contrasting temperatures makes the grass dewy.
Refreshing the world with a sprinkling of diamonds,
Astounding me with the sparkles of a rainbow,
Aspiring to grasp my thoughts of being reborn,

I walk across the grass leaving a virgin trace
Wandering near to the placid lakes cool face.
There the quiet soaked my spirit yet lifted it.
Elegant young trees reached for the waters.
Not afraid of the freezing mist arising there.

It seemed to be amusing itself as the sun rose
Inspiring me, as it painted a scene for the day
I missed the romantic feelings as the night fled,
There the dark peace had embraced me well,
I shall await the night where I seem to be free.

Yours, Ian T xx

Words can build a nation

great to hear from you after this long time.
Will be happy to see you playing with words.
Thanks for stopping and commenting.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thank you for the visit. Always great to hear from you
I usually like to play with new forms.
Appreciate your time and the comment. Would be great to see you trying your hand with this form... maybe one day. :)

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Please follow me on Instagram
https://instagram.com/poetry.jo?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

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do enjoy also my
tulips poetry
like daffodils
Rula

lovedly for you kind visit.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Please follow me on Instagram
https://instagram.com/poetry.jo?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

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