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Dance for now

In the distance
of a dark lovely night...
we dance alone
in hope
someone will come through
the darker forest
from a horse alight
right
and pick me up
to take home
away from my home

till such a one arrives
I shall dance tonight
rain, hail or storm
dance will be the norm

come tonight
dance alright
along with me
yeah that's right

we will dance
vertically and horizontally
that's all up to me
not ye...

let me

dance for now !

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This is too gentle to end it up with that shout
Keep it as tender as your lone dance, will you? :)

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softened

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I liked it much.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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A nice one but I agree with Rula's comment...

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raj (sublime_ocean)

the last caps were taken off
thanks for ur msg
another one i will post here softly one

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