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Daffy Duck

Submitted by Keith Logan on Sun, 2017-01-29 18:02

Daffy Duck
has worst of luck
unlike his friend Bugs Bunny;
has fear of work
will always shirk
except in search for money.

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Mon, 2017-01-30 09:36

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American imperialism at work
https://fadingtheaesthetic.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/33788991-how-to-r...

cheers,
Jess
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K William

Sat, 2017-02-25 20:28

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Keith Logan

Tue, 2017-02-21 20:49

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it is simply meant to be a bit of fun.

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weirdelf

Wed, 2017-02-22 03:03

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"lacked accomplishment"
that is hardly constructive criticism, K. William
I have yet to read your work. When I do I hope to offer more useful feedback.

cheers,
Jess
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Keith Logan

Wed, 2017-02-22 16:14

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K Williams was systematically attacking a body of my work because I had the audacity to say something unfavourable about one of his poems.

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