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curvaceous

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2012-08-25 05:38

the body soft and milky white,
the curves indented and smooth …
the twist in the waist line does resume
a natural spontaneous desire
upon young minds to assume
the presentation of the twisted
snaky, wavy curves of a damsel in despair
awaiting her lover, are an open invitation,
to who so ever dares to devour
and
drink sweet poison from mountains and valleys,
subject to the passion of those
yet virgins in body, soul and mind
the bubbling youth ready for a take,
the valleys and mounds at stake,
rip them apart if you care
to enjoy hear the rapturous aaahs and ouches
then deliver the bone stout
to shear all dimensions and strew apart
as the two then bathe
in the glory of that,
what once was

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Free verse
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Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Sat, 2012-08-25 07:28

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But I think you are a wrinkly, ugly 60 year old man,

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loved

Sat, 2012-08-25 09:04

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how true 92
and you?? 102..................shit like is it

The gift of Divine is a perfect body neither yours nor mine but two souls interlocked as and into one to enjoy the whole purpose of life if there is one apart from sexual union Jess smile but wash your tongue

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weirdelf

Sat, 2012-08-25 21:30

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I'm 4976 years old.

I was kidding about your age, it was a back-handed compliment on the wisdom of your poem.

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-08-25 09:41

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the body soft
and milky white,
the curves smooth
and indented the twist
in the waist line does
resume natural ways
spontaneous desire
upon young minds to
assume presentation
the twisted wavy
snaky curves,
of a damsel
in despair
awaiting
her lover,
are an open
invitation, to
who so ever dares
to devour and drink
sweet poison of mountains
and valleys,subject to the passion
of those yet virgins in their ownbody,
soul and mind the bubbling youth ready
for a take,the valleys and mounds at stake,
rip them apart if you careto enjoy hear the
rapturous aaahs and ouches then deliver the
bone stout to shear all dimensions and strew
apart as the two then bathe in the glory of that,
what once was a beautiful form to my faint eyes

Your Piece as the outline of a person just for fun lol Have a great day ,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sat, 2012-08-25 13:42

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you are a dedicated soul Ian... now I know
what a wonderful depiction
of a couple
in action
and you take
the cake
and
my poem is now at stake
i present it to you in the form
you choose all's well with me ,
when at this age of yours you can gel
with the women of glee..for which youth today rally daily
and you make merry with your descriptive entry...like a woman
shaped vibrator.. let her so be ......like a bee and you bee too... a honey bee

loved

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