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Creation, A Sam Poem
The breath of God lifts fledglings over trees,
their tufty feathers fluffed and barely spread,
to play with parents darting on the breeze,
a healthy joy of life that dampens dread
A tabby cat enthralled by sounds of night
sees azure haze split by a lance of fire;
his furry face aglow with wild delight
and full-heart beating to an avian choir.
Survival of the fittest may belie
the innate love such creatures typify.
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United Kingdom (Scotland)
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Robert Burns, Robert Lewis Stevenson, Kipling., I like things childish.
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jane210660
Tue, 2016-05-10 05:50
I love this. It's quite
I love this. It's quite beautiful and has made my day better. Jx
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Keith Logan
Wed, 2016-05-11 03:00
Watching sam
drink in the sounds of gloaming was a true eye opener to me. I had no idea animals had that kind of soul.
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author commentRula
Wed, 2016-05-11 00:08
This is awesome
Mr. Logan. I was hoping for a sonnet from your pen, but I have enjoyed this and feel quite satisfied. Thanks for sharing.
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Keith Logan
Wed, 2016-05-11 03:05
Well then
I must dig into my sonnet repertoire and see what fairly fresh piece I can dig out. No gentleman ever wishes to be the means of disappointment for a lady.
PS: strictly speaking, lord or Lady is an accident of birth but a gentleman or gentlewoman are self made.
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author commentRula
Thu, 2016-05-12 03:53
I liked
your PS added.
I'll make sure to remember this.
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Rula
Thu, 2016-05-12 03:58
I liked
your PS added.
I'll make sure to remember this.
BTW, the language in this piece and the word choice, you know, the alliteration and so is really stunning!
My applause!
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