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But of course..July Contest
But of course
I am still in school of thoughts
when to pull up my socks
when will she look at me
when will I do what
perhaps a kiss
but the fatso there
alone at me does stare
how to avoid the black horn one
I am scared
so I leave the school from the back door
all are unaware
till I see another guy
kiss the one
for whom I my whole life would lay bare
But alas he too damn does care
Who is she to me
oh my Delaware!
of that rascal be aware
I wanted a virgin in you my
Sweety for you I did care!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
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Comments
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2015-07-22 21:58
Loved
School days hopes dreams about heart crush, nice
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lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-23 00:09
thanks barbara
after a long tyme u traverse
scribbler
Thu, 2015-07-23 08:43
Hi loved
One of the things which was special about the start of a new school year was seeing how much change class mates had gone through during the summer. .................stan
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-23 13:39
ok
don't expect to win
do i
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2015-07-23 21:56
I'm here loved
Not as often as I wish but often as I can. Lol
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Barbara Writes
Mon, 2015-07-27 13:23
You posted twice?
I like romance in this piece
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Sparrow
Mon, 2015-07-27 18:26
Loved
a great write for July, wonder if this can win ???
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Mon, 2015-07-27 21:48
no ...no at all----- all know that
I am a born loser
so i just compose
what my mind does dispose
and Stan in me
NO CONFIDENCE DOES
repose