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But of course..July Contest

But of course

I am still in school of thoughts
when to pull up my socks

when will she look at me
when will I do what

perhaps a kiss
but the fatso there
alone at me does stare
how to avoid the black horn one
I am scared

so I leave the school from the back door
all are unaware
till I see another guy
kiss the one
for whom I my whole life would lay bare

But alas he too damn does care
Who is she to me
oh my Delaware!
of that rascal be aware
I wanted a virgin in you my
Sweety for you I did care!

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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School days hopes dreams about heart crush, nice

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after a long tyme u traverse

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One of the things which was special about the start of a new school year was seeing how much change class mates had gone through during the summer. .................stan

don't expect to win
do i

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Not as often as I wish but often as I can. Lol

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I like romance in this piece

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a great write for July, wonder if this can win ???
Yours Ian..

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I am a born loser
so i just compose
what my mind does dispose
and Stan in me
NO CONFIDENCE DOES
repose

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