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Cosmic

In the shadows lurks a desire
to seek the naked truth
of free spirit.
Stepping out it's energized
to dwell in the cosmos
for ever after.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

Thanks again for reading and your good words...This not being a haiku/senryu/sonnet I haven't consciously kept track of the syllable count...please feel free to make suggestion if that would help improve meter / cadence...appreciate your stopping by friend..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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It Is... I mean the idea and the theme of this little gem.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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for reading and your comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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