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Color of a Poem

Submitted by raj on Sat, 2016-03-26 14:28

A creative thought
crimson, blue, dark or white in
ethereal shades

Style / type:

Structured: Eastern

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Comments

Sun, 2016-03-27 03:56

Seren's picture

What a beautiful poem I can

What a beautiful poem I can offer nothing but praise

Wow !! And a sigh.

Love and big hugs Jayne xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Sun, 2016-03-27 14:32

Hi Jayne

Good to see you. Thank you for the time and your appreciative comment. Means a lot..

Much love and warm hugs...stay well...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Tue, 2016-04-05 14:05

Seren's picture

I decided to read this again

I decided to read this again before bed .. on ripples of thought I wish you goodnight. Shhh its actuall 4am the sun will be up in about and hour and forty lol better get a little rest

This is a very good poem my friend

Love always Jayne x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Sun, 2016-03-27 09:54

alidzain's picture

Raj

I agree with Jayne. Kudos.

Alid

Sun, 2016-03-27 14:33

Thanks Alid for you time..

Thanks Alid for you time...read and comment

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Tue, 2016-03-29 00:15

Roscoe Lane's picture

Simple,

Simple and perfectly done. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Tue, 2016-03-29 13:41

Thanks Roscoe for your time,

Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Tue, 2016-03-29 13:41

Thanks Roscoe for your time,

Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Tue, 2016-03-29 13:59

Rula's picture

perfecto!

I like it

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Tue, 2016-03-29 14:11

Thanks a lot Rula for your

Thanks a lot Rula for your comment. Good to know you liked it.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Fri, 2018-01-26 16:03

Thanks a lot Molly for your

Thanks a lot Molly for your words of appreciation which will encourage me to write more...

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Fri, 2018-01-26 16:58

Hi Raj!

The color of thoughts is something I'd never considered. I wonder what color a lazy summer thought is? lol......stan

Sat, 2018-01-27 14:16

Hi Stan

you got mr thinking for sure :)

Regards..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Sun, 2018-01-28 06:49

lovedly's picture

I agree with stan

thoughts have
vibrations and impressions
eyes see colours..
and
raj

Sat, 2018-01-27 14:17

Don't know what you mean by

Don't know what you mean by me dissociating...

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Sun, 2018-01-28 06:50

lovedly's picture

sorry my error ...I have removed it

well thought is much better

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