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Coffee Beans

You've been so hard,
I've been so mean,
I wanted you
_No matter what!

Ruthlessly
I got you ground
To brew
My mourning mug

Last few words: 
The (mourning) is intended the way it's written
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I wish it was so much longer!
The poem is well punctuated but doesn't end with a period....so I hope this means you plan to keep going!!

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Thank you for taking the time to read this little piece inspired by a pro shot. I'm pleased to know that you like it.
Not sure that I have anything to add, but totally agree with you that a period is missed there.
Highly appreciate it.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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