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CLOUD WATCHERS

Blue eyes blink open
across tattering gray sky
to watch storm depart

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Try reading just the first and third lines then tell me if it should be watching or watch. I appreciate the thought you put into this form which I only scribble out once in a while

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Enjoyable is what I aim for. So I reckon I did well. Winning a contest is secondary to sharing to me

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Lying in a hammock, staring at the sky, making rabbits out of clouds! ~ Geez.
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Watching the sky open back up as the storm clouds leave. BTW I was on the front porch yesterday talking to my nearest neighbor and we almost got run over by a deer lol

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