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Celluloid Immortality

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2015-10-23 10:42

Sixteen millimeter memories
smiles frozen in space
ghosts in slow motion
living moments in Time
false resurrections.
phantom epiphanies
tricks of modern technology
keeping the dead alive

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

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Joan Rolls

Sat, 2015-10-24 07:15

Its funny. I read this after

Its funny. I read this after I posted a poem about the dead in photos!
I like your poem I can really relate to the sentiment you have expressed so well.

Geremia

Sat, 2015-10-24 09:16

Thanks, Joan, Great poets

Thanks, Joan, Great poets think alike.

joe

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Geezer

Sat, 2015-10-24 11:04

Yes...

they do! I can't say enough about either of these works. You have brought such a great deal to this site Joe. I always read and may not comment, but you are always read! ~ Gee

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Geremia

Sat, 2015-10-24 11:06

Thank you, Gee. That means a

Thank you, Gee. That means a lot to me.

joe

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Celluloid Immortality