You've got a solid block of text that looks like a mind dump and is not inviting.

I haven't even gotten to the content of your words and I am already losing interest. Should I invest my limited time trying to tweeze your meaning, or should i move on?

My inclination is to move on.

Once i start to read, it is worse for me. There is inconsistent use of punctuation and capitalization and I feel you want me to work harder to read the work than you did to create it.

For me, it is not an ideal situation.

Unasked, I am going to recast your work, changing nothing but the structure, punctuation, and capitalization.

*****

A sophistication is in the air
as heros meet to greet;
can't even wink to dismiss this earthly bliss
in a time well spent in thought.

She walked alone on the side of the street,
searching for a direction to go,
a car pulled over to help her to the next town but,
he had a gun.

She was stripped of her modest dignity,
left as road kill in vehicle,
barely alive but yet breathing,
with duct tape around her mouth.

Took her inside,
to a vast dungeon of existence,
with barbed wire fences,
locked her inside a closet;
she was used as a sex toy for him to enjoy.

Days would pass.
She had every reason to grasp a way of escape.

The authorities were out,
on the run,
looking for the girl in peril.

The day she decided to escape
he ended her fate by locking her in the ground,
darkened dungeon down below
filled with maggot, feces, rodents, and wasps.

She cried,
desperate to find a way of escape,
then out of no where
a white light appeared.

Personifications of wings,
with a heightened gait intact,
at once to touch her hand.

The being explained,
"Do not be frightened,
I will be your guide
to show you a way of escape".

Moments passed,
not a word,
then her tormentor arrived
with toast & cheese.

As she accepted it
he stroke(d) her hand with a knife,
told her never to escape again.

There,
at the back of the plate,
was a key to to the door.

For now she was free.

Immediately she went into the woods,
in peril,
her heart raising as her pulse heightened.

She was finally free,
there at the edge of the woods,
the start of a city filled with glee.

See she was finally safe,
then the angel appeared to her again:
"For I will always be your friend if you just simply let me in".

Finally her tormentor was caught
and he went straight to prison.

He had captured the timid girl without any reason?

The girl lived,
happily ever after,
and chose to devote herself
to the cause of love.