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Canadians vocation

very beautiful we also let
our kids do and follow
at safe distance
as you are from Canada you know
half the year
we cut grass,
the other half we clear snow
all our cash earnings
out they flow
all don't have engineering firms
that of course you know

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Is that all you do in Canada lol.
Didn't like this much it was limited and could have portrayed a lot more..
While I was in Canada there were so many things going on and the country was buzzing, Montreal, Ottawa, and Toronto especially the later were great cities, not forgetting Edmonton, and Calgary, I personally love the place and would go live there if I wasn't so old lol but there again you never know lol.
I think a little more think in this one and we'd be cooking on gas,
Yours Ian.T
PS:- Need a rescue on my "It is far too late" it will become unpublished in two days

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