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BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about
BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about
a challenge to those who know
that this way they shan't walk again
even alone….
so be thyself
let the world go to hell ,
we have to live
the life ordained
so let it not be by our weakness stained
for tomorrow is definitely preordained
how….
none can that say
but heart within does display,
a desire that's what Loved can now say..
the hour appointed
has not yet been anointed
time has a time of its own
a watch to mankind yet unknown
unless the scientists invent
a switch off
switch..
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Frenchf
Thu, 2013-01-31 13:31
these are great words
thank you
loved
Thu, 2013-01-31 20:46
thanks friend
2 U 2
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Ian.T
Fri, 2013-02-01 04:13
Good piece of quiet shout,
Good piece of quiet shout, just the one line that I couldn't find
Rhyme or reason for, LOL
none can that say = None can say that now.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-02-01 04:49
IN POETRY
we should at times
ignore rhyme reason and grammar
have you ever read
Urdu /Hindi poets
they use their names like
Mirza Ghalib world renowned
alive till today.
and for years hereafter they all say.
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