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BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about

BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about

a challenge to those who know
that this way they shan't walk again
even alone….

so be thyself
let the world go to hell ,
we have to live
the life ordained
so let it not be by our weakness stained

for tomorrow is definitely preordained
none can that say
but heart within does display,
a desire that's what Loved can now say..

the hour appointed
has not yet been anointed
time has a time of its own

a watch to mankind yet unknown
unless the scientists invent
a switch off

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Good piece of quiet shout, just the one line that I couldn't find
Rhyme or reason for, LOL
none can that say = None can say that now.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

we should at times
ignore rhyme reason and grammar

have you ever read
Urdu /Hindi poets
they use their names like
Mirza Ghalib world renowned
alive till today.

and for years hereafter they all say.


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