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Black heart

The way you love me,
Be honest with me,
I want to know are you honest with me,
I saw you with another girl,
I hope you not cheating on me,
I know you have a black heart that doesn’t mean you leave me…

The game you are playing don’t make me fool,
Don’t use me and throw me as a tool,
I’m not want you to break my heart again,
Please tell me if something going on with you,
I don’t want you to ruin my day again,
I know you’re talking that girl why don’t you tell me,
I know you have a black heart that doesn’t mean you leave me…

Listen to me; I’m with the girl that doesn’t mean I’m dating her,
She’s colleague, there is nothing between us,
If you don’t believe me you can ask her,
I love you, you need to trust,
I know you think I have a black heart but I swear to god you’re the only one in my heart…

You may be thinking so much about me,
Now you need to rest,
For you my love, I can give you my love test,
I have booked a table at the beach,
We will have dinner and watch the sunset,
I love you much, you can’t even reach,
I know you think Schrey has black heart but he swear to god you’re the only one in his heart,
I know you think I have a black heart but I swear to god you’re the only one in my heart…

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