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Beading

I love beading my way
Through life as I can see
The work I have done.
Things have gotten so
Hectic in my attitude that
I need a passion to ease
My pain. Like mindedness is the
Anatomy of being yourself to know
You life and what you are meant to do.
Beading is my personal statement said
To my calmness, as life takes me back to
The fact I can feel through my feelings with these
Colorful sparkled looking things that I call home.
Beading to get my life back on my mind and body
I don't think it's time for me to ever stop improving.

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Free verse
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Comments

Understand the beading part well, as we do crafts here, from altered states of items such as Mousetraps and teacups, labels, Atc's and Beads, so many things.
They are an escape from the day to day problems or because we are both retired here, it's something to do. If you need about a thousand decorative pins just ask. I love decoupage and have sent many a picture to friends all over the world, lots of these things are a challenge so it keeps us active.
Loved the piece, just needs a tidy up in places and try to stick to one form , but hear me and my random writes, Take care and good to see you here,
Yours Ian..

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