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To Be

To be unattached
From the threads of
Yesterday and tomorrow.
To embrace music within
And dance in the cool air.
To close my eyes
And see a bright, open path.
To sit in silence
And listen to my heart.

To understand the Mourning Dove.

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Style / type: 
Free verse
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

That is the purpose of Yoga. To let all outside influence pass and be one with yourself and the world. Nice thoughts and well expressed.
-Geez.
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I've had a pleasant, peaceful morning. There was a Mourning Dove nearby, and I finally realized that it's not the unmistakable call of the bird that is meaningful, but its very presence - the gift of itself when it sits so peacefully with others and sings.
Thank you!
L

author comment

Such sweet words from you! It was a precious morning, and I thoroughly welcomed every tranquil moment. Thank you, Teddy, for your kind comments!
L

author comment

in mourning
in morning
grief or no grief
we all suffer those moments
equally
the birds and the bees and we wee
lave
do read my GRIEF poemy
Let Grief Be Brief

I will most definitely read your poem. Thank you for visiting here!
L

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to evaluate success
Yes I saw ur reading
GRIEF ONE
thnx

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