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I saw the first of them today.
Little flashes of yellow riding
the breeze across in front of me.
Migration from tree to ground has begun.
Soon now this back road will be covered.
Leaping into the swirling air as I pass by.
An orange and red and yellow announcement.
Fall has returned.

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Seems that you are fascinated by the flashing colored lights.

If this was mine, I would make a littlt tweek in the last line,

"An orange and red and yellow announcement

Fall has returned."

So, I'd say
An orange and red and yellow announcing
the return of fall
or look even for a fresher word than "return"

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Perhaps I missed the subtext.

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Jess
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