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There you are
using your mind
you own it
use it
ere it

She is hungry of /for admiration
let her be
when she has left nothing to show
no one will her like to mow
reap she will as does she sow

This is what happens
when you listen to others
and let your brain rust
sad but in yourself
you lost your confidence

My views my thoughts
Meditation needs
no time
no posture
you can meditate whenever
even while walking
as it is only concentrating of thoughts
which are going towards
a wilderness
you don't even know
so just concentrate your thoughts
that's all
take control of your mind
of your brain
that is all
that is
about meditation

And those who appreciate
are greater than the great
those guys were frauds
I kicked them out of my plate
like stale fish
now no one will them taste
human minds must remain chaste
like loves taste..

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Free verse
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I liked this generally but there as a little repetition that did not enhance the work. Might I suggest you arm yourself with the free program wordweb, I could not get by without it. It is a combination dictionary and thesaurus.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy

thank you generally
glad your visit was maidenly
you have never
read me

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