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The art of forgetting.

Never forget those, furnace blown
in the black mills of war

Some may forget the poets, and
all that came before

But I can't ignore the mystery,
and sup at the ornate cup for more

Like a ritual libation, burning through-
you continually regret, yet relish

Its singular pleasures and the
sublime shock that gets

You every time you read Thomas,
as a sunrise, mirrors sunset

The world may forget the poets,
As in its dark folds falls

But look at the Velvel history, of
Larkin, laboring in his halls

To bring us slices of unique humanity,
Where all were surely aimed

Square at our hearts and guts, and through
the echoing caverns of our brains

They may forget the poets, but I feel Hardy now,
As though the fog bell breath of morning,
was ushered in, and his pen just fell.

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Structured: Western
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brilliant poem nothing else I can say to this beauty

except I wish I had written it

cheers Jayne

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Glad you enjoyed. Reading your profile, and given how long you've been writing, this means a lot - thank you! I shall endeavor to read some of your poems.

Thanks,

Chris.

Chris Hall - Tasmania

Grossbooted draymen rolled barrels dullthudding out of Prince's stores and bumped them up on the brewery float. On the brewery float bumped dullthudding barrels rolled by grossbooted draymen out of Prince's stores.

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Just a few loud claps to let you know that it was appreciated. I did wonder though, if you meant sips instead of sups? Libation makes one think of something to drink, rather than eat. ~ Geezer.

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I'm gonna be up all night thinking about that one now! I think in the north of England, from whence I came - we used sup, as in drink, I not the dictionary definition notes "Northern" England:

sup

verbNORTHERN ENGLISHdated
1.
take (drink or liquid food) by sips or spoonfuls.
"she supped up her soup delightedly"

So up t'north she'd be acceptable lad :) - I still might change it though. Thanks, glad you enjoyed.

Chris.

Chris Hall - Tasmania

Grossbooted draymen rolled barrels dullthudding out of Prince's stores and bumped them up on the brewery float. On the brewery float bumped dullthudding barrels rolled by grossbooted draymen out of Prince's stores.

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