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ANOTHER ANGEL 2018 PASSES BY

ANOTHER ANGEL PASSES BY
Time lapses again and again
into its own golden, nay diamond casket
Another angel passes by
and a new one will emerge tonight
Twilight to twilight

The winds of change as usual continue
CORRUPTION and POLLUTION still continue
They have become and are order of the day

And best of all, all Religious ones have discovered
the imprisonment of LORDS
in Mandirs and Churches and Mosques
need to be abandoned
to keep alive the modern generation

why leave trillions for another generation
what did we inherit can tell me someone

They now lead from the ramparts of Time
they voice their say
Let’s make bridges today
till another Angel passes away.

Time and God manifest the hour
God has endeavoured to remain in power
a tsunami was a recent example

Man’s Golden awards have become
the call of the hour

let us do our duty, as said Lord Krishna
Time is the only constant that did have
Yesterday, today and tomorrow
the power to move on like a steady River
So be as it may
I to all humanity again say
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2019
Today
till it also lapses away
another angel will surely come
when we have also well done
Amen

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A lovely well written piece, Angels are made and sent each moment.. ( to day can you make it one word please x ) Today is the last of 2018 each day seems in a hurry to pass, is it because we are on the downward slope lol..
Take care and have a great new Year,
Yours as always Ian ..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

typo shall make it now
today

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I know you are very old, my friend, but that is never an excuse for self indulgent poetry.
I never gave Joe an inch while he gave us the grace of dying with us, why should I you?
Please use your last times to write with all the skill, wisdom and knowledge you have.

I know you have the skills. About fucking time to use them.

cheers,
Jess
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the scenario is quite different
any way thanks for the abuses and curses
Now I am used to it

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I wrote a long, eloquent and friendly response to this, Lovedly. But it seems to have got lost.

Suffice to say that I believe in you and am very sorry if my goading tactics, trying to bring out the best of you, were unkind and not the best way to go.

You do know that I truly appreciate your gems and that if I don't give you the attention you need it is still more than I give most other poets here.

cheers,
Jess
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There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

I know
I NOW NOE
THAT's why I regard you so
HAVE A
HNY
AND
take ur medicine
U r like my
One time bro

CHEERS I OWE U
MUCHLEE SO

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(((hugs)))

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

You are so lucky to have two comments and maybe a hidden third from Jess, even if he shouts at you some times, and you must have seen the Blog of mine about comments..
Have a great new year out there and know we all walk the same road,
Yors Ian ..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

LOVEDLY LEFT...........>>>>>>>>>>>>>OOOOOOOOOOOOsssssssZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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now I also can't see
lol may be
STAY Blessed will ye
thanks HAPPY NEEE YR

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mostly
imaginary IMAGERY
LOL
I ain't totally blind
nor
am I deaf fully yet

I walk straight @79
another guy @72
was with hair white
mine were not
lol

ah I am fully bald
many thanks
did u not laugh
I heard
thanks

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stay blessed always

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do read some other
apples off my poetree
soonly

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The quality of being in touch with your inner self shines through in this beautiful piece. Very current as well.

you have yet not
come of age....
Thanks nokros
come across more often
I shall also read some
coming from South Africa
I had a dear poet friend once

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