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Alone

Today I sat alone by my window
And watched the snow fall on the ground
I looked at your pictures
I listened to your songs
But Today I sat alone.

My heart breaks deep down inside
Cause I’m wishing you were by my side
My thoughts they reach out to you
My tears cleanse my sole
But Today I sat alone.

I have your beautiful memories
But I feel so alone
My heart breaks deep down inside
My tears cleanse my sole
But Today I sat alone.

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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Comments

What do you think. I wrote this poem cause I am missing my sweetheart who past away last spring with cancer. I truely miss her.

author comment

Welcome to the site! Thank you for sharing
your poem, a subject many will resonate
with ... loss is part of the human experience
but that doesn't make it easy.

Your poem could be improved but I think
you could just let this one be and write more,
if that is your intention.

regards,
Richard

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