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alls momentary

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2016-05-13 07:51

Just a moment’s worth

A moment is
for just a moment only...
not forever!!!!!!
but absolutely momentary

all is theoretically relative
ask Einstein...
where all has he been......

nothing lasts forever....
all is just worth
a night's love affair....

it lasts till
man's
lasts...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Fri, 2016-05-13 17:15

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clumps together with other seconds to make a moment and moments band together to make hours and hours to days and days...etc. Some moments aren't worth remembering, but the hours they comprise are precious! ~ Gee.

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lovedly

Sat, 2016-05-14 02:24

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so succinct
as does spell your beautiful ink

thank you Geezer
you smile as I
dare to wink
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lovedly

Sat, 2016-05-14 04:07

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Nobody will ever read.....
such a long poem....
your vision
will not be envisioned...

but
your vision alone
of the aged old man shows

the old grand pa lived a life of joy...
and
you will follow.......soonly

looking into the vast wilderness
my eyes never tire
as there alone I see satisfaction
and
admire my true love
watching me from the distance
far that
far, far, really far

it's my minds vision

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