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All is Well In My World

There’s a lot to see under the sun
There’s a lot to hear under the moon
Under the dark of night, creatures sing songs of joy
Daylight brings hustle and bustle of daytime

COVID 19 a pandemic arrived
Earth heals in the night.

The flicker of a candle burns bright in the night
Brings delight to eyes that all is well in my world.

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Dear barbara,
After your last write, I am thrilled to see you writing this beautiful cheerful poem, and I agree the night time brings much music from nature.
A beautiful night time poem of hope.
Take care.

Songs of joy?

Just a thought adding the s for plural

Thank you...Teddy

I appreciate your visit to my work. I corrected the grammar. Glad you like it

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Dear Barbara, I song of joy, indeed. My only nit is that it's a tad prosy. Myself, I would try a re-write of some verses to do away with some "the's" and other unnecessary words.
All the same, enjoyed and thanks for sharing, keep bringing joy to this family. All the best, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

I made some grammar changes. thanks for the suggestions.

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Good to read your poem ....nice one...others have already commented before me...

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

I always appreciate your visit. Glad you enjoyed it

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