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Addiction

one more sip
one more shot
one more hit,
of that pot.

Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words: 
16 days sober
Editing stage: 

Comments

The last line sums it all fantastic!
How did ya decide on of as opposed to from? (just curious)

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That's how I see it,

Mark L.

To see your real work. I know how good you can be.

Honestly, there is not much said here and not much to say about it.

cheers,
Jess
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