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I may need to be away for a while

I consistently screw up but one thing I know I am very good at is choosing good people for jobs they do well, so Workshops, Mentors, and by your own choice if you voted, the AC will function just fine,
see you soon.

excerpt from “Paracelsus" by Robert Browning

At times I almost dream
I too have spent a life the sages’ way,
And tread once more familiar paths. Perchance
I perished in an arrogant self-reliance
Ages ago; and in that act a prayer
For one more chance went up so earnest, so
Instinct with better light let in by death,
That life was blotted out — not so completely
But scattered wrecks enough of it remain,
Dim memories, as now, when once more seems
The goal in sight again.”

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And return when you can............stan

friend

cheers,
Jess
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Take with you our thoughts that are strong enough to lean on when required,
Have a good journey, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

We will see you when you come back :)

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

missed by all

loved

see you soon.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

author comment

Where could you go, Jess?

Rumi writes:

“The minute I heard my first love story I started looking for you, not knowing how blind that was. Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along.”

love always

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

author comment

You're not back already are you, says Ian backing toward his cave.
You go sort out the others, I shall quickly unpublish my pieces before you get there LOL.
I'll give you love, leaving me all alone.. ?? !! Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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