Sourav

Member since July 31, 2009

Member for 16 years, 10 months

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Lonely Verse

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 10 lines · 1 critiques

All the things that broken and gone

All the emotions lying shattered

Resonate in my heart like a song

Leave a mark on my soul;

With remains of this broken field

Alone in this darkness again and again

I play with my innocence and my guilt

And create a world of my own.

Sourav’s timeline

July 2024
30 Tue

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2019
30 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2014
30 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2010
30 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
18 Sun

Received a critique
on Lonely Verse from @Lil Z
"I love the depth and feel of this one, it's a great write!"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Lonely Verse
" All the things that broken and gone"
Open thread 10 lines
March 2010
13 Sat

Received a critique
on Rainy Night from @barbsdad2003
"An apt picture of despair. But (too often an unwelcome "but" follows to step on heels, doesn't it?) it seems you've painted the shell around the seed. And now I'd like to see the nut, the meat of it. And if there's a wa…"
February 2010
28 Sun

Received a critique
on Rainy Night from @Kailashana
"Trust me, it usually gets a whole lot verse before the worst is yet to come. Ummm.. I meant to write that. Keep on keeping on young master Sourav from India, remember Namaste is only a bow away. ~A "If parents really wo…"
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Rainy Night
" Desolate dark night Continual fall of rain,"
Open thread 19 lines
September 2009
20 Sun

Critiqued
"Frontier" by @Bert Lamrick
"Very good write and very enjoyable!"
16 Wed

Received a critique
on The Assassination from @Geezer
"The doubt I feel at getting your meaning, is what kept me from rating this higher. I think you mean that we are kept prisoner by the thinking of our societal stratus. If you are influenced by the way the people around y…"
16 Wed

Critiqued
"Till I've Ended" by @mantiscepter
"This is absolutely beautiful write. I've read this quite a few times. I loved lines of this poem. Such a wonderfully constructed poem! Great write!"
16 Wed

Critiqued
"The Beat Is So Good..." by @Geezer
"I'm speechless. What a mesmerizing poem. I just loved the first stanza, the way the whole poem begins! Absolutely stunning write!"
16 Wed

Critiqued
"Slivers of Life's Blooming" by @Nordic cloud
"The language you've used is Awesome. This is a kind of poem that flows in the mind and touches the heart. I'm glad that I've read it. Pleasure."
16 Wed

Critiqued
"Love in The Night" by @RuthMalfoy
"Well... I can see few spelling and grammatical mistakes there. I appreciate the thoughts and passion behind the write though. I feel you need to revise once."
16 Wed

Posted a poem
The Assassination
" Thoughts are haunted Shrouded by black sheet"
Open thread 31 lines
08 Tue

Critiqued
"Long Drive Home." by @lyz
"Nice one for sure. Wonderful flow. I liked and appreciate your 'story telling' ability. Well done!"
08 Tue

Critiqued
"Magickal Child" by @Ravenshakti
"It's very captivating. I liked the language you have used here. A very good write!"
August 2009
28 Fri

Received a critique
on Fleeting Thoughts from @Godweed
"I've read the other works you posted, and for me, this has the most natural rhythm and is both poignant and profound. I love your use of language, in particular, in the 1st and 2nd verses. I don't know if you meant for…"
28 Fri

Critiqued
"An Idiot We All Know" by @docmaverick
"Rant? Well... sometimes poems do sound good in that way. When someone is writing from extreme emotions, it may sound like a rant but the point is how good he/she does manage to structure the poem. In this case, I can it…"
27 Thu

Received a critique
on Fleeting Thoughts from @hugo la rosa
"Your poem is imbued with a great sentiment for the poor and needy who suffer. Your first three lines, however, in all stanzas are almost flowing nicely, but the last verse on them kind of gets a little off the rest of t…"
26 Wed

Received a critique
on Fleeting Thoughts from @Ravenshakti
"This poem has a beauty and sensitivity, that I find very refreshing. Your words match my contemplations, to the level of Synchronicity. Which I find fascinating, to say the least. An exquisite write. Raven"
26 Wed

Received a critique
on Fleeting Thoughts from @Seren
"We are bleed silently at some point in our life, you ahve just done it in word I just have a suggestion for you ? Sadness always has living face --- this line didnt work too well for me how about Sadness wears a living…"
26 Wed

Posted a poem
Fleeting Thoughts
"Castigated by the bows of sorrow"
Open thread 15 lines
11 Tue

Posted a poem
Hunger
"You haven’t seen it"
Open thread 30 lines
06 Thu

Posted a poem
Notion
"In the midst of concrete jungle"
Open thread 16 lines
01 Sat

First critique offered
on "Lasting Vision" by @Seren
July 2009
31 Fri

First publication
Monotony
31 Fri

Posted a poem
Monotony
"All are the same; just they are same"
Open thread 20 lines
30 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.