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Trial Run of Weekly Prompt for Fun

About a month back our friend IRiz had floated an Idea of starting Weekly Prompts

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In the mean time, while this idea takes a formal form and details are worked out and notified later by the designated Member of the committee.. I thought I would start this stream for fun sake..

For starters..Stan (Scribbler) has created the prompt of this week as

"through the night trees fireflies swarm"..

Let's start posting in this stream your poem conforming to the above prompt... since it's the idea of IRiz i request her to have the first go at it...anyone else may also do it..

let us all have fun in this trial run..
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Comments

through the night trees
fireflies swarm
like L E Ds
they sparkle all around

calling everybody
to gather on the lawn
it is party time
while summer is on

Ms. Winter's on a holiday
somewhere in the north
she said she can't make it
anyways its too hot

Lady Fall is busy
making fashion wear
when summer gets over
she'll start her sale

so Baby Summer said
the party is still on
so folks let's freak out
before we run out of time
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

A good first poem for the prompt. Now I need to get of my duff and write something lol

I/m sure you will come up with a good one...i say that based on my experience of reading your poems...

eagerly
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Run by Barbara Writes successfully for years now.
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/renga-18-rainraindrops

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

is a prompt for people to use on their Own entire poems, not for a run on or round robin poem. I am working on another poem at the moment but expect to post a poem here based on the prompt today or tomorrow.

you have already provided a prompt ...I think we will go by it for this week...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Yesterday night
hoping to see the waning moon,
I took my kayak for a ride.
I left pretty late.
An orange sunset
tumbled behind
the black of the lake.
I moved through
a thousand bright and broken
lines of red copper,
passing
an ancient bronze of drift wood,
feeling the silk
of weightless water. I moved
not to disturb the quiet.
But I pissed off a beaver.
His angry tail flapping
was loud and clear.

I glided under the arches of branches
leaning over the surface.

I saw ducklings hiding
in the reeds of the shore,
and a deer feeding
her two angular ankly fawns.

And before darkness fall
the flashing showers started.
Fireflies. They made me forget
why I came there at first.

IRiz

nice pictorial poem IRiz

the last line describes the enchanting impact of fireflies
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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i was sitting in the boat open-mouthed
with a paddle slowly falling out of hands
i saw at that moment
what i have always known
this is how
new universes are born
this is where
light can stay safe asleep till the morning
and this
funny little blinking is holy

IRiz

hey did girlie say to me
how did sweety imagine
the thought
from where I came from

ah now I see
all fireflies with glee
flying around me
and each one
]gives me a touch
plants a small hole
as such
and as the night drew by and morn arose
all fire fries froze
about my holiness
someone was to compose
but my jersey
she said
now was more holey than whole
all fire files their assembly did close
I was now no more
but
HOLES
they my holiness did dispose

"where'd did"? where did did? lol at typo. Enjoyed this read and the play on holy-holey.......stan

"where'd did"?
i purposely did it
whether u'd LOL it
and u did

but let it be
many flies don't come for me
an extra d won't harm any

you might have

nicely captured moments IRiz
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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this could easily be an extension of the earlier poem. Is it meant to be that? And the fact that nature can provide holy moments is too often over looked.....stan

ankly......worth reading just for that lol. But I enjoyed this all the way through......stan

Hi Stan,
Russian language has the word for long limb teen-like body plan, litraly it is translatted ankly.
I search it in English did not find anything close to be an official word and decided just to use my poetic lisence. Thank you for reading.
The lake behind my house is really a special place. What I described in the poem is all true.
Except the feeding mother I saw on a different trip. It is not easy to spot them, even if they are not afraid of humans, for feeding they usually hide. Thank you for a sweet prompt. I think we should go ahead with the idea. Exchanging prompts makes people participate more actively.

IRiz

all fire fries froze...

u inspired my holey prose
but reading it now
i c u also froze
fire fly scare comes as does
a dose

Thank you, but it is not the same :)

IRiz

we should go ahead but maybe more than a single weekly prompt?

Let's see how submission of the topics will go. On Google+ some poetic communities have everyday prompt. We can have a list of prompts for the week.

IRiz

it was that fateful day
on twenty first of May
songs of summer in air
almost like a fun fare

as night swept over down town
the sky wore a grayish gown
no stars performing in the sky
new moon had said bye bye

in a far off home by the country side
all lights were beaming full of joy
moods were upswing on high tide
for all folks to party and enjoy

as fate would have it on that night
all of a sudden there wasn't a light
they reported their plight to 9 1 1
without hitting the panic button

the wait was long no candles at hand
shrouded in dark in destiny's hand
soon fireflies came blinking their lights
waking them from stupor and fright

these fluorescent cops wore solar hats
which charge by the day when asleep
they wake up on call of their 911 boss
on a mission to light up dark nights
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

First let me say it's good to see you venturing into rhyme. Plus using fire flies as first responders is original and works well.......stan

good to get a pat on the back from a master of rhyme....i'm trying to venture into it ...nice to know that you liked fire flies as first responders :)
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Hi Raj,
Your poetic metaphor for 911 deserves to be shown to my neighbor, he is a police officer and I am sure he will frame your poem on the wall.

IRiz

hahaha...may be they will breed them and send them on a night prowl....it is a legend that Doves were used as Messengers in the good old days...so why not use fireflies? ...lol..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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BEFORE STARS APPEAR

Crescent moon is rising in the east
as the sun sets in the west.
Nothing stirring, neither man nor beast
while the day and night contest.

Just as the sun winks out of sight
but still before the night stars blaze
there comes the evening's first light
flitting through a warm thin haze.

Soon the single tiny neon glow
is joined by others of its kind.
their numbers continuously grow
as the last of day is left behind.

Until throughout the forest's trees
a galaxy of fire flies swirl
seeking mates and memories;
that ancient tale of boy meets girl.

this is a super poem....i liked the transitions of time when the fire flies appear and liked the ending as well...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

I hoped I'd done at least OK

Stan, your poem is fantastic!
First, I love the flow, cadence is fabulous.
Then, your observations are very precise and together with simple wording they make me see your poem as if I am part of it, some bird or a tree.

IRiz

Glad you liked this scribble and you know how it is :simple words from a simple man lol

I feel I succeded when my writing comes out simple. I am into simplicity in life, self-expression, taste in art, food, clothing.
The only place where complexity allowed temporarily is science and only for the lack of imagination. Lol.

IRiz

Westernized poet
undenied /undefined ...BETTER LOL

even say fire flies
emerging
from the forest every night
each night to delight

I am pleased you think so lol

those who at least say LOL to me
and stan ur the ONLY ONE
who does and can
ur neopoets only mannnnnnnnnnn
and of whom i am a fan
lol
not a ceiling one stan

OKAY DO REREAD THE MODERNISED POETRY EDITED

I saw you framed by the moonlight
The stars played in your flaxen hair
My love filled the four corners of life
You filled my depths with feelings warm
Through the night trees fireflies swarm.
I knew then my peace with the universe.
Would last for a thousand years more
Eternity beckoned hear the final score..

Just a bit for the hell of it, Have a lovely time,
Yours Ian.T ..

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

The poem has your distinct voice. Sweet lines.

IRiz

deleted since i thought the comment was meant for me...apologies
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

it's a pleasure to have you on board with your vision as seen in your poem...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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I told a firefly to stop flashing her bum
she asked if it did distract my attention?

I told her it did, but why does she ask
she told me to kindly place her in a flask

that night I asked her to tell me her story
here I go she said but it's not hunky-dory

"I was born to a mom, a fan of Madame Curie
but when I was born, she had left in a hurry
so mom took over her work that's inactive
that's why I was raised in a lab radioactive
I sneaked into her lab always by the night
not knowing then that it would be my plight
it wasn't my fault that my potty was in there
why it was flashing I wasn't at all aware
no sooner I sat it started twinkling my bum
ever since that time they're stuck like a gum
when mom came rushing to answer my call
she said I'm a radium girl she can't help at all
I wish I had a button to put of this flash light
but no matter what they get turned on by night"

while wishing her good night I asked what's her name
she said it's Irene, like daughter of the Curies of fame
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

Oh hoho.
I hope the similarity of names
is coincidental.
Sincerely yours, Glowing in the Dark Bug.

IRiz

Oh so you did notice the name but it does have a great connection to a famed scientist ..:) I liked the "glowing in the dark bug"
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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It adds nothing to Neopoet. who need suggestions for ideas? No poet worth anything.

It won't be made official without proven commitment to running it by Raj and Irene and I seriously doubt it it will receive AC approval.

I suggest revitalising the idea of a monthly or weekly 'highlighted poem' instead.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

please rest assured that AC's decision shall be respected.
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

Hahaha, Raj.
I agree. I am not a revolutioner and I am full of respect to AC, ABC and everything else that serves peace and prosperity of people of Neopoet. Big hug to Jess, he needs one now, after being mean he must feel bitter.

IRiz

just disagree with the idea.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

i wish i could have such blinkers
mounted on the roof of my car
through heaviest of traffic jams
i would drive like a movie star

I would get the right of way
with folks watching in dismay
as I zoom across the crossing
without a ticket or booking

but I feel like a fool that's fooled
by the fly who sold me her blinkers
because when the fire ran out of them
they were useless without their chargers
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Through the night trees fireflies swarm"..
Firefly damn selfish creature of the night
You glow and flash your ass to the world
Cold light worth a fortune to humanity

Does this mean to have something so great
We have to give up something very special ?
I refuse you flashing creature, I will never stop
The fate of our planet doesn't reach the top

Our fellow man will keep polluting the air
One day you amongst others wont be there
Neat as a passenger pigeon, or a distant Dodo
Who will care as other fade and die away.

I shall turn on my fans it is warm today.

Love you all maybe, Yours Ian

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Good one Ian
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Just trying to write outside of my normal theme and sway.
Thanks for your visit,
Yours Ian..

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Sounds good!
I like your anger.

IRiz

Just a few words to show that a little anger can be enough. I can spit snakes if provoked lol
Take care and lovely to see you,
Yours Ian..

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

What a wonderful metaphor!

IRiz

I'm coming round to this idea, it will help develop our sense of community.

I would still also like to see someone volunteer to run a weekly or monthly 'Featured Poem'.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

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