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Jul 19, 2010
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Fortress
Alas the day has gone,
In his wake the dark veil of night,
Her mysteries within the boundless
reaches of my mind.
Pushing the limits celestial treasure
is sought, hidden within twilight
folds of her infinite robe.
Velvety touch caresses my soul,
Cocooned in her ambiguity,
encompassing lust.
I hunger for the knowing this great
queen has brought forth,
I clamber to float within her chariot
of stars, to meld amidst the primordial
blackness of her, to blink out of
existence freed from earthly
plights, she wraps around me like
a warm winter coat.
Copyright©2010Kristina Russell
In his wake the dark veil of night,
Her mysteries within the boundless
reaches of my mind.
Pushing the limits celestial treasure
is sought, hidden within twilight
folds of her infinite robe.
Velvety touch caresses my soul,
Cocooned in her ambiguity,
encompassing lust.
I hunger for the knowing this great
queen has brought forth,
I clamber to float within her chariot
of stars, to meld amidst the primordial
blackness of her, to blink out of
existence freed from earthly
plights, she wraps around me like
a warm winter coat.
Copyright©2010Kristina Russell
— katplath, Jul 19, 2010
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Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Great write!
weirdelf
15 years 10 months ago
verbiage
DawningDaytripper
15 years 10 months ago
Hemm, you had me till your
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
Welcome to Neo Katplath
weirdelf
15 years 10 months ago
xena, tell the truth
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
The truth..