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forgiveness is a thin red line

Jesus was a freak
with sunlight in his hair
the devil points his finger
and ten thousand days are numbered
then instantly rehashed...
still
condemned to the same calamitous past;
the future turns on a dime
unannounced and renounced
as if nothing could ever change,

venturing out from the cloud
of our confusion
we never
see it coming
like some proverbial beast
gasping for ten last words
between condemnation and redemption
in our beleaguered trial of fire
mired in the constancy of fate;
and now the stage is set for the present
a thin red line
crossed over,
a stone's throw from hell,
and the burning sting of hate.

Buddha sits contemplating his belly,
and emptiness returns us to life
the dove of peace
descends with the flaming heart of love.














 



— Kailashana, Jul 02, 2010

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raskin

15 years 11 months ago

Well done, eh? Forgiveness,

Well done, eh? Forgiveness, redemption great themes. I love that stuff. I like this one.
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Only humans and demi-gods

Only humans and demi-gods need blame and redemption. Thanks for reading Arrow. ~ The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

I bow ~ there arent words

I bow ~ there arent words you have found your muchness love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

wonderful Anna!

you are a beautiful poetess! with much love shirley harrison
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

This well is deep

My friend this well is very deep. I really like the lines venturing out from the cloud of our confusion we never see it coming sometimes I am in such a cloud that I just can't seem to shake, great write *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*