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Jun 03, 2010
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the first words written
for six days
he toiled
on the seventh
his assistant Peter
took charge
of the key
He said,
"Keep watch
I sleep and call it
sabbath"
the master slept
and Peter gathered
a chorus of angels
inspiring them,
to give thanks
in chamber
they worked their craft
all day, their voices
carving architecture
fit for god,
Elohim
when dawn arose
on Monday,
there for all time
stood the Guf
crafted by the hands
of angels
and filled with souls
by his mercy
and as spirals
of time
coil the earth
the Septuagint
found its first book
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guf
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Septuagint#Table_of_books
— Seren, Jun 03, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
WoW JayCee
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Xena
magics02
16 years ago
Very nice Jayne
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Mona
loved
16 years ago
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Seren
16 years ago
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loved
16 years ago
but of course u haven't
Seren
16 years ago
Did you tell me about it LOL
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16 years ago
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Seren
16 years ago
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16 years ago
lovely jc
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
Breakinglogic
15 years 11 months ago
I especially love religious
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15 years 11 months ago
Dear Logic
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15 years 11 months ago
interesting…
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks :)
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15 years 11 months ago
hi
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15 years 11 months ago
Dear Ziggy
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful write only crit in
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear John