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Lady by the Sea

I let my treasures be plunderedI thought you lost at seastill I wonderedcould you still had loved me hope comes in with the tidejust to be washed out againalong with tears and prideI'm always here, when it comes in all day through the nightstorm raged, gale winds blewI could not see lightfrom the light house, to guide you morning, word cameout on the barrier reefwreckage with my namecouldn't contain my grief over come by my fearsI wade into the frigid coldno holding back my tearsI go under, someone grabs hold he's alive, but very weakwonder he didn't drownhe's been trying to speakwanted you to be found shut up old manlisten to metake my handno more sea your silver and gold lieswhere only fish can gosilk blew across the skiesyour men in watery grave below I never wanted treasuresof silver and goldI like simple pleasuresstrong arms to hold soft words in my eareyes locked on mineholding me nearsending chills up my spine old man, I'm taking you hometo where I waited these yearsfor you, to no longer roamand to kiss away my tears copyright   5-30-10   huey horton   (hippiepoet69)            
— hippiepoet69, May 30, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Awe Huey

I love it...very nice sentiment and images. Rosina xena465
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks xena

I love reading and writting story poems. I cut 4 or 5 verses from the begining of it. It's better without them. The poem took on it's own life. And went in a different derection. Very seldom do I know where a poem is going when I start it. That's part of the fun. Take Care Princess. huey
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks loved

It's funny how renewed love can inspire you. I have wrote more in the last month than I have in ten years. A month ago I found her again. Hopefully I will keep writting happy poems. Take Care. huey
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magics02

16 years ago

Hippie poet how wonderful this is

AND WHERE ARE YOU DEAREST POET?? I have not seen you as of late, hope all is well and I love this one the Sea Lady...good write my friend. Grazie Mona xoxox
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks Mona

Things are going slow but very well. I've written a couple more poems. But have not posted them. And working on a couple more. I only write or read when I'm in a certen mode. And also I've been getting a little work done around here. I love doing story poems. One of my sisters loved this poem. Another one couldn't fullow it. Oh well. I appreciate your read and commenting. And if you see a problem with any of my poems, let me know. I try not change from first person to a second person. But sometimes you have to. I think that lost my sister Margie. I better get offline. My Lady will be getting off work soon. And you know I'm at her breck & call. LOL P.S. I hope ya'll fare better than we are with the oil nightmare. I'm getting mad again just thing about it. Take Care. huey
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magics02

16 years ago

Will do Huey

Yeah I hear ya spending too much time on here myself lately. Not getting anything done, gonna change up on that soon. LOL YES I am also sickened about the oil, all the pelicans, everything a mess. We won't go there tonite but I will keep a look out for you and yes I do love your writings very much. Honestly Mona xoxoxo
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magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Hippie poet my friend

Just where are you at and best get to writing again hope all is well by you Love Magics Momma oxooxo pm me or something let me know whats up down south? lol
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hippiepoet69

15 years 10 months ago

Hi! Mona

Thanks Mona for Thinking about this old hippie. I'm doing a late Sping cleaning of my house and tard. Holly should be here this weekend. I've been searching for low cost or free things to do. There is always some kind of event going on here. Us coonasses party at the drop of a hat. There is so much to see and do here. One of my sister's live on a lake with more than 12 hundred miles of shoreline. Louisianna is a sportman paridise. If things go well. You will see very little of this happyhippie. Take Care. huey
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magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Well I hope all goes well

And I apprecaite you taking the time to answer my comment. I hope you have a great time and please remember to keep up on your writing for I miss your writes alot dear friend Love and Peace to you and Holly Mona xoxox