She Protesteth Too Much

Yes I understand totally from you response. And I share the same feelings as you and others as of late. When you mention sharks I feel as if sometimes the chum and bloodied bait is set out just like in the ocean for the sharks to swarm in and take the bait. I have learned so much since I began here that is the truth. Hence I don't play in the bait to be feed on any longer. No one in here is a number one everyone brings something to the table, some more then others but does not make them superior over anyone else. I just write also for my other audience and people outside of Neopoet. I am neither concerned of stats or from comments that are not of truth, All I ask from readers is to be honest, read the poem and if it needs work I am open minded enough to take critique no matter how the reader sees it, I can work in the perameters of the critique and make corrections as I feel should be and that is good enough for me. I appreciate you as a writer and a person as you speak out also of how you feel. If others are upset for I am friends with many here and they have issue with one of my writers, well that is not my problem. It is theres alone. I am not in high school either. I am never persuaded to go along with someone else if they are mad or angry with someone else here. Hypocritical is not my game here as I came to improve my writing and to read others. I don't play silly ass games in here with no one and no one's feelings for sure. I just had a thougth when you wrote about sharks and the bait that feeds them: Clear out of the infested waters and the oceans smoothness shall overcome the turbulence. Thanks Jetz and how is the weather up there in my home town lately. I bet the tulips are blooming all over, My grandmother used to have a tulip garden that was so big and beautiful up on the hill in Norwalk and oh how I would love to go there again. Someday I told Joey we will all come up to visit the place where I was born - me and my three brothers. I can't wait. Until then you take care and continue on your writings have really grown also since I first met you here. Take care gal Love Mona xoxoxox