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May 05, 2010
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Fantasy
Fantasy
Often times
she fantasized
the love contained
within his eyes
The spark within
his fingertips
the paths he'd travel
with hungry lips
She'd hear his voice
the love within
on that she focused
forgetting sin
For how could fate
ever be so cruel
bringing her here
without setting rules
Would she ever listen
would she even hear
could she be so foolish
after all these years
Hell, YES she could
in fact, she is...
her fantasy
that she is his.
— jetz, May 05, 2010
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jetz
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Licia, You always
loved
16 years 1 month ago
Extremely gifted
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Loved, Thanks so much
hippiepoet69
16 years 1 month ago
Looks Like
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Huey, Was nice to see a
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Your back Jetz
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Mona, I am well,
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Superb
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
I thank you Rosina for your