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Fantasy

 Fantasy


Often times
she fantasized
the love contained
within his eyes
The spark within
his fingertips
the paths he'd travel
with hungry lips
She'd hear his voice
the love within
on that she focused
forgetting sin
For how could fate
ever be so cruel
bringing her here
without setting rules
Would she ever listen
would she even hear
could she be so foolish
after all these years


Hell, YES she could
in fact, she is...

her fantasy
that she is his.

— jetz, May 05, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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jetz

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Licia, You always

Thanks Licia, You always bring a smile to my face. I should have you close by when I try a new recipe. You're great for my ego!!!! Thanks again, Sue
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Extremely gifted

first comment first submission and instant spot light admission what a fantasy you must be and for all here to your poem see, sorry, read within moments of ones fascination
jetz

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Loved, Thanks so much

Hi Loved, Thanks so much for the read and the nice response. Nice to receive a poem as a reply. You been taking lessons from Eph? Sue
H

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Looks Like

I'm not the only one who's been busy while you was gone. Carry on your fantasy and enjoy. And may it only inspire Happy poems. Take Care. huey
jetz

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Huey, Was nice to see a

Hi Huey, Was nice to see a response from you. Thanks for the read and I'll try to work on the happy poems!!! Sue
M

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Your back Jetz

Great poem gal and how are you doing? Nice to see you again and wondered what happened to you. Your a great writer girl Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
jetz

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Mona, I am well,

Hi Mona, I am well, thanks. How are things with you? I never really left, just didn't have anything to say!! Thanks for your always positive comments. You are a bit of sunshine, in an often cloudy place. (Neo) Sue
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Superb

A brilliant piece of work...well written Jetz. Rosina xena465