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raj

A Cobblestoned Path

The sound of silence greets me
each time  I pace this path
wandering now like a nomad
on each stone baring time...
 

Kneeling to caress each textured piece
still warm from her naked feet
blades of grass greet my lips
still wet from the dew enshrined...
 

A gentle breeze whispers me awake
from my reverie of cobbled dreams
rustling leaves hasten my breath
on sighting those cupids engraved...


The soul keeps bursting in joyous tears
in their rivulets the cupids get washed
"I will wait till the  rainbow reappears"
promises each sparkling drop....


sublime_ocean (raj)

— raj, Apr 26, 2010

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

WoW

Raj...Brilliant. I can feel my own feet walking through this lovely well written poem. Fabulous. Rosina xena465
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you...

Thank you Rosina for stopping by to read it and for your encouraging response...i appreciate it even though thats the only comment i got thus far :) warmly...raj...