Deepest Journey

To want your touch with every ounce of breath
I crave you heart like loves shimmering echo
My sweeping hand across beauties soul
Fall into my arms and come now with me

Take me now my seductive girl
As I prepare our way of ecstasy's reach
To strip down bare and kiss you there
A trip, a voyage, a journey of desire

We ride the waves of passion's high seas
And drift on through loves cascading pools
To join in a union of the deepest kind
Don't stop now my sweetest obsession

Please spend your cravings on me my love
How sweet is the music that now plays
For time has stopped for lovers to be
For our love, our passion and sweet ecstasy

— Stuart Reiss, Apr 24, 2010

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Critiques

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

Wow passionate or what!

I love it It has a majesty to it , a depth of passion that is not smutty or lewd in any way. All I can say is lucky woman and I hope the love is duly returned. Seabhac

Stuart Reiss

16 years 1 month ago

Thankyou very much !!

Wow Seabhac thank you very very much... I'm soo glad you like it! I have been enjoying a very wonderful friendship with and even more wonderful woman.... and SHE is the one I have searched for my whole life... this is for her Best Regards Stu :-)

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

Oh and it shows Stuart, your love.

Ann of Norway This has the delicacy of the feminine with the boldness of the masculine so beautifully balanced and full of unsentimental charm Stuart, och it has. "I crave you heart like loves shimmering echo" This line I especially enjoyed imagining in my mind. "And drift on through loves cascading pools" This was so richly liquid and lusciously sensuous. Love to you love, both of you what is there that is more all consuming of our attention than that? Ann. "How sweet is the music that now does play"......I would prefer it without the does! "For time has stopped for lovers to be For our love, our passion and sweet ecstasy"......these two lines were not quite the ones to end this otherwise wonderful poem with .....?

Stuart Reiss

16 years 1 month ago

Awww Ann love the comment

I actually liked what you said about the "does" and I removed it..Good suggestion!!...Many thanks Ann. I like the rest so Im going to leave it :-). Really really glad that people have liked this one Many thanks Stu :-)

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 1 month ago

Sailing the seven seas of

Hey Stuart, You are sailing the seven seas of love, riding the high waves crest with subtle soul but with the ocean's energy and vibrance. Love the spirit of this one and I am sure she took your hand and did the horizonal tango in breath taking style... Emotionally stiring this piece is and I can see the adoration embedded deep within it. Grand write Stu! Dale :)

Stuart Reiss

16 years 1 month ago

Well no horizontal tango

Well no horizontal tango lol.. the mere thought of one day being with the one I love is sheer poetry in itself Dale!!! Many thanks for your incredibly generous comment Best regards Stu :-)