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SWEET TOMORROW!!!!
SWEET TOMORROW
Like an amoeba, the present seem shapeless
Losing melody, cracked is the old record
Lacking in beauty, aesthetics depreciates
Genuine warmth, lukewarm topples
Sure reality diminishes into obscenity
Yet, a peep at the faithful sunlight
A picture, it truly portrays a future
Indeed, it’s a sweet tomorrow.
An epoch of countless bliss as sand
Good embraces better to make it best
Perfection partners truth, yes it is love
Can any define its taste at all?
A future spiced in sweetness
It’s a sweet tomorrow, void of a sorrow
A tomorrow not lacking In essence
Just as today, flaunts its tasty presence
Flowers unfold ,mystery as beauty
Mammals deliver in future, semblance of today
Aves, shell tomorrow, in a cute present
Even the weather, saves its best in uncertainty
An aroma precedes the sauce
Yet in a tomorrow, many a dream hopes to anchor
Depreciate its essence, loose its innocence
A journey, tastier than potatoes
Sweet tomorrow, possibilities set the stage
Oh! Sweet tomorrow, come give me my space
Sweet tomorrow! The present in reality set the essence.
Felix Joseph osaeghemede (+2348037825027) [email protected]
Lagos Nigeria .
“The spices we put into our lives today, makes for a tastier tomorrow”
(Felix. o. Joseph)
This poem was written 13-09-2008,10:00pm-12:35.
My greatest inspiration is the HolySpirit.
Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Chumfin
chumfin
16 years 1 month ago
am greatful to you!
ziggy
16 years 1 month ago
hi
chumfin
16 years 1 month ago
sir! nice to meet you
chumfin
16 years 1 month ago
my dear sister!
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
This is a superbly penned
chumfin
15 years 11 months ago
dear Marishine
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Chumfin, Thank You so
chumfin
15 years 11 months ago
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