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SWEET TOMORROW!!!!

 

SWEET TOMORROW

 

 

Like an amoeba, the present seem shapeless

Losing melody, cracked is the old record

Lacking in beauty, aesthetics depreciates

Genuine warmth, lukewarm topples

Sure reality diminishes into obscenity

Yet, a peep at the faithful sunlight

A picture, it truly portrays a future

Indeed, it’s a sweet tomorrow.

 

 

An epoch of countless bliss as sand

Good embraces better to make it best

Perfection partners truth, yes it is love

Can any define its taste at all?

A future spiced in sweetness

It’s a sweet tomorrow, void of a sorrow

A tomorrow not lacking In essence

Just as today, flaunts its tasty presence

 

 

Flowers unfold ,mystery as beauty

Mammals deliver in future, semblance of today

Aves, shell tomorrow, in a cute present

Even the weather, saves its best in uncertainty

An aroma precedes the sauce

Yet in a tomorrow, many a dream hopes to anchor

Depreciate its essence, loose its innocence

 A journey, tastier than potatoes

Sweet tomorrow, possibilities set the stage

Oh! Sweet tomorrow, come give me my space

Sweet tomorrow! The present in reality set the essence.

 

 

Felix Joseph osaeghemede (+2348037825027) [email protected]

Lagos Nigeria .

 

“The spices we put into our lives today, makes for a tastier tomorrow”

(Felix. o. Joseph)

 

This poem was  written 13-09-2008,10:00pm-12:35.

 

My greatest inspiration is the HolySpirit.


— chumfin, Apr 21, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Chumfin

Brilliant lovely compasionate write. Like I've said to you many times...you're a true poet...flawless. Rosina xena465
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

am greatful to you!

thank you sooo much for this great compliments, its very encouraging. thank you again
Z

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hello ,i thought it was time i came to your page there certainly is alot going on in this piece my favourite line is " yet in a tomorrow, many a dream hopes to anchor " v good line fine write ,,zigs
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

sir! nice to meet you

dear Ziggy, its really great you came to read my works , i appreciate the time you gave to reading it, am also very happy you like that line. thank you very much. chumfin
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

my dear sister!

Dear black Queen, i thank you for the philosophical comment, i am very happy you like it. thank you for coming by. chumfin
MS

Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

This is a superbly penned

This is a superbly penned poem Chumfish, with some wonderful poetic gems sprinkled like stardust in the lines. Wonderfully expressed and so finely expressed. A privilege to read and also a great pleasure. Thank You so very much for sharing!
chumfin

chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

dear Marishine

i will keep saying your comments is something i always look forward to any time, its very poetic commentary, you have a way with it, i wish i could be that good too. chumfin
MS

Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Chumfin, Thank You so

Dear Chumfin, Thank You so very much for your most kind words. My dear fellow poet, you are far ahead of me and reading your work is always so inspiring. You are a fine Master Craftsman and a brilliant Wordsmith. I learn from you! Blessings, always.......
chumfin

chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

ha! thanks you so much for

ha! thanks you so much for the great compliments, when i said what i said ,there is a great part of you i really admire, the way you analyze poem, i tell you what you touch in that sphere is excellent, i mean it regards to you chumfin