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chumfin

Mar 26, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WHO AM I?

WHO AM I?

Who am I, I ask myself?

My true mood I can’t explain

Sometimes I feel am chained

Expression has to be plain

By this, I can kill this pain

Wisdom pours in like rain

Seek it and make some gain

Yet my impact is yet be felt

What is my fault?

Oh, yes me

Who am I?

Who I am, I ask again.

Within me, I see a hole

Flourishing, within is a soul

Joy alone nurtures its roots

Yes! Happiness is its fruits

Is that, who am I?

Yes, I want to know.

As a stream, I begin to flow

Over time, I have to grow

An unending stretch, as I flow

My source, makes the grow

Halting my exit, in a quick bow

Now I know who I am!

My mood has been planed

I see I have a soul

Liberated, as it flows from source

My source is high up celestial

He makes me, who I am

As a seed I was

Contending amongst striving millions

I won the chance to be me

Who am I?

Yes! A champion , defeating the many

I am me today ,

‘cos he knew me then

And picked for his choice

Am a star in a dark world

A destiny loaded to deliver

Igniting change like a spark

Am great, so he created

A wonder his hand has craft

Now I know, who I am

In the light of great wisdom

His illumination, has revealed

Am a part of him

Author: Holy Spirit

Felix Joseph Osaeghemede

([email protected])+2348037825027.

Written:24-08-2007 ;3-35am.

“The greatest offense to you, is not knowing the real you in you, that wants to empower you, its all in you”

(Felix Joseph osaeghemede )

— chumfin, Mar 26, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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Critiques

16 years 2 months ago

hey chum !!!!! excellent content

i really love what you are saying, 'Wisdom pours in like rain' Seek it and make some gain ... seems out of place. i think it needs to be further into the poem, maybe after 'Is that, who am I? Yes, I want to know.' nice mesage of self-realisation love judy

16 years 2 months ago

Judy, i will not cease to

Judy, i will not cease to appreciate you for the way you approach issue , i mean the way you present your suggestions its always very appealing, i will look into it . thanks for the kind comments, love chum.

16 years 2 months ago

thank you!

Judy, i will not cease to appreciate you for the way you approach issue , i mean the way you present your suggestions its always very appealing, i will look into it . thanks for the kind comments, love chum.

M

16 years 2 months ago

Someone else that speaks volumes here

Another great one and nice to know that someone knows who they are and writes of it, speaks of it and lives it. Blessings to you new friend Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 2 months ago

thank for reading!

Magics02 thanks to you for the kind comment, i really appreciate the words, i like your philosophy about life. thank you.

16 years 2 months ago

Hey bud !!!

don't go scaring my new chum away Chum - you don't have to change anything if you don't want - i will not whip up a storm ... i only get angry (pretend) with crud here. love judy

16 years 2 months ago

nice to meet you

it really great having you come by to read my work. i feel very honored by that than you. chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

gracias!

Annie, thanks for that wonderful comment. its so powerful . i liked it very much. thanks again. chumfin

M

16 years 2 months ago

Yes he does Lovely

Chumfin here it lies and is here it lays upon yourself and all your praise. i am glad for you to be a part of Neo now. Love, Magics02 and yes Lovely got it right on the nail Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 2 months ago

thanks for the smile !

thanks for sharing that great smile and the fine comment of encouragement. with great people like you in the house am more than happy to be with you guys here. i came in 2008 and went on AWOL. i never knew there were such interesting guys like you all here, am happy to be part of you all cheers chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

Just beautiful

Dear Chumfin-This is really beautifully written. I like how fully you have expressed yourself with such sincerity. It is such a profound poem. I love it. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

15 years 11 months ago

ma,am,

plenty thanks to you again for the comments. regards chumfin