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rolling in green fields
I was reposed on green velvet
when a notion struck,
so, I took out my tweezers
and set to task
painstakingly I separated
minute fibers of spirit,
away from itself
after examining each shimmer
as it waxed and waned,
a lifeline of ego and id
refracted from Father
I fell into conundrum
what had I done ??
it was only when
daffodils bloomed
and the blue heron arrived
that my tweezers
breached a void
I was astonished to find
a vast empty cavern,
and without its whole
the inner was,
nonexistent
I begin a new endeavor
of reconnection
for, what was once
a spirit for life
throwing a dustcover
on the typewriter,
and sheathing my pen
I have but Milli seconds
left on this page
I detect the scent of lilies
mixed with myrrh,
I follow,
and in my wake
a white dingo steps light
as riding his back the claws
of a blue heron relax,
into the syncopation of journey
at each step the strips
of separation,
refashion a new age
on the horizon Esperanza
swirls veils of green velvet
and in the peripheral
La Mort's shadow
curls, ever closer
Critiques
CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
Brilliantly written love
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks huni love and hugs
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
What a visual
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mona
greeneyes
16 years 3 months ago
As usual, you have me in
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Your imagination never
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Rosina
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seren,It was
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Pamela
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ephraim
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ephraim
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Is there a traditional tale
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seahbac
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
I Love This, Jayne-Chloe
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Venus
arja
16 years 3 months ago
..i agree this is beautiful,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Awwww Alone whenever I am
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Green fields...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Gee
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Can't wait....
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest GeeI am so glad I
Stuart Reiss
16 years 3 months ago
Beautifully written
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Stu
yenti
16 years 3 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ian