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magics02
Feb 21, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

YOUR PHOTOGRAPH

 
 Your photograph means so much to meYour eyes,your smile, that angelic lookOh I long to still be with thee
A special one, forever a part of me
 Your photograph, how much it means to meThe picture, the memories, how I long for thee
Your face, your smile,  memories of love
A star shines down from the heavens above
You're spirits here, it walks with me
I miss you so much, my cousin is sheFor you and your pictures of days gone past
All those sweet memories, forever will last.

Your love I carry with me all the time
How I long to hear your voice againSwept away that cold February dayOh how I miss you so much in every way

Your photograph means so much to me
How I miss you my cousin, I know you see
No one will ever be quite as beautiful as you
Your  photograph speaks,  forever I love you....
 To my cousin Cathymms 2.19.10 
— magics02, Feb 21, 2010

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ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 3 months ago

Mona

I really like this and the idea of it. How you said that your cousin is still with you. In your heart. She'll always be with you, and y ou just keep on praying and everything is gonna be alright. Dani. (:
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes she is

This cousin was like a sister to me in so many ways it killed me to see her go. She took care of me on bed rest, she was there for me all the way all through my young days and she will always remain a big part of me forever until we rejoice again together she awaits. Thank you hunter Love, magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Indi

I sent out the email to him and let him know and now I wonder will I still be able to submit it in spoken word as I worked on it several times and loved how it sounded and Joey said Mom thats great!! MY favorite critic here lol waiting for one of you new poems patiently dearest friend of mine. love, magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes indeed Indi

Joey said it was nice to talk to you too. Now he asks me about Indi, thanks for the encouragement you handed him also friend. Get that computer going and see you soon posting those wonderful writes of yours. Your friend here from Florida magicsmonamomma lol xoxoxo "Determination Brings Success"
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Such a lovely tribute and I feel sure your cousin hears

Ann of Norway Such a lovely tribute and I feel sure your cousin hears your voice when you read it aloud to the air, she is there with you, become a part of the air you breathe while you think of her, part of you in your everyday, as inside you you have this love, that is something that once there, is there, and never leaves you, your own expression of life, its core, its heart beat, its meaning. Love from me to you Anna XO
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I can relate to this

I can relate to this totally. When I look at all the pictures of loved ones...even my pets, that have passed on, my stomach fills with flutters of despair and I feel them with me in the eyes of the picture...so life-like...pictures of them still make me cry...sometimes I have to hide their pictures from my eyes. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Judy lady

I miss her so much and her photo sits right beside me guiding me her way. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading. Much love to you Judy lady Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Hey Magics02….Loved this

Hey Magics02.... Loved this write it had a nice flow and it honestly felt like something i could have written myself strangely enough... The style incorporates a shakesperian feel with it A very nice write!! Best regards Stu :-)
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Stu!

That was such a nice compliment and sometimes I also read a poem and I feel that it is me writing it too. I wonder what that is. This particular poem I wrote for my cousin who I lost in 1995, her photographs sit right beside me at my office desk and I was inspired to write of her this way. She was a beautiful young lady lost her life to cancer and oh how I lost something so dear to me that day that no one can replace. Nicest woman ever and thank you Stu again for commenting on this poem. I will chat with you soon my friend Love magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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Millage

16 years 3 months ago

Beautiful

What a charming write my sweetheart. Much love Millage x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you as always my Millage

You know I wrote this about my cousin but it could be any photograph also of any one that I so love in my family and in my life. Hope all is well there for you and I want that hat! Italian Bistro!! kisses and hugs to you friend Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
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BrightEyed

16 years 3 months ago

love it

so beautiful and so sad. i love the emotion you put into it. wonderful piece. -ur friend, bright eyed
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you so bright

I see you and would love to chat again soon, will be by to visit you real soon, thank you always for your kind comments and feedback. Love, magics02 x0x0x0x Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

Lovely write for your cousin ... thought the lines being out of sync with each other stilted the read ... just a suggestion because a tidy ?? and I think this one would read much smoother ... and like I said just a suggestion some people like the scattered look and effect it gives will keep my eye out for spoken word from you I love hearing how everyone sounds its a music teacher thing lol ... hmmm made me remember I did another spoken word and didnt submit it lol Kind regards Jayne-Chloe
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

thanks seren

Yes it came out great but I can not get it in mp3 oog I wrote to Andrew guess I will try him again as I sent it out to everyone on my email addy and alot sent back a wow that was beautiful I shall try again and hope you are feeling well today. I am still sick home for three days from work will be better soon and back as a lion lol xoxo Love, Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

seren

I tinkered with it a little bit let me know how it reads now any better, I know sometimes I go back to the ones I wrote earlier and then tweak it tweak it until I get it just right to leave it that way, but I love to hear views from others also, so thank you for visit. Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

thank you lovely judy

Yes I worked on it after seren and you suggested and I thank you for the comment and the shining stars love mona xoxoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I really like this

I actually got a tear running down my face right now, you've capsized me with that, very good, I'm sure that your cousin is smiling down at you for this one :)
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

AWWW

Yes thank you as her picture is right here watching me type. I did this in spoken word but could not get it to come on here, I will send it to you in an email at your home email addy if you want to send that to me in a PM other then that I will try again to see how I can get the spoken word on here as it is gook IMHO. lol Thank you for comments and the stars love, magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.